Wednesday, April 04, 2007

Budding love

I writ your name on every flower, on every leaf of every tree,
With hope that one day as they blossomed
Your love would do the same for me,

So while I waited, frustrated remembered I a crucial fact,
Tends to take her time does mother nature
But my tender heart patience lacked,

So pleaded I for days and days, until the days turned into weeks,
Don’t torture me on the hands of time
Plant seeds of love in who my heart seeks,

And true it was, finally as any wish come true can be,
Our love did sprout and with us grew
But yet so fast I did not see,

With my spell cast, our good times past summer spring and autumn too,
And withered we like the fruits of June
In winter’s presence, you were not due.


Beautiful is everything that comes in its time,
As is a word ending a sentence carrying a rhyme,
Matters of the heart, you should not haste,
Or else life’s rich sweetness, bitter will taste.

5 Comments:

Blogger Little Penguin said...

brilliant..

you've been working on this for 4 months?.. The beginning sounds like Emily Dickinson..

I agree with what you said.. should a couple's love fail to blossom, the sweetness of life will become bitter... I think that everyone of us has not only an urge, but a necessity, to share his life with someone he/she values above all.. be it a happy moment, a line of verse, a last-gasp football goal.. whatever.. once it's shared, I believe it's perfected the moment.. and if this need is adequately reciprocated then we have love at is best :)

beautiful poem..

Regards

1:59 pm  
Blogger Sincerity said...

lol its been 3 months not 4! and no, this poem took 2days to write! well, 2 days and 1 night, i woke up in the middle of the night with the idea of rearranging the last stanza to better suit the poem and writ it :S mkhabla mu? thankyou anyway, im really glad you liked it..

Ps: Emily Dickinson? Wow, huge compliment :)

12:47 pm  
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8:25 pm  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

hi
thought the poem was really nice.

H

2:14 pm  
Blogger Saroora said...

hihi,

nice poem. i reallyy like the title, budding love. and little penguin, i know emily dickinson! we're doing here poem in school.

nice poem. i like the usage of words and everything! i hope u write another poem real soon.

c ya
byebyebye

11:30 pm  

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